Chris
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Post by Chris on Sept 19, 2004 19:59:17 GMT
Ok Im starting a Shenmue Fanfic,I'll update it regularly. Part 1. GuiZhang grabed the bottle of Whiskey next to his desk,"Why must I keep thinking about this.." He muttered as he took a shot-glass from his desk draw. He had been thinking about Ryo for a while now,"Was he hurt,Has he found Lan-Di,Has he disscovered the mystery of the Phoenix mirror,but the one he dreaded to think...Was he alive".His leg was nearly healed but he didnt even know where Ryo would be..."That is it!" he yelled as he threw his glass to the floor,breaking it into tiny pieces."Im going after him" he continued in a calmer tone,"I am going to Hong Kong". What do you think? Good,Bad,Somewhere in the middle?
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Post by JoePesciAddict on Sept 19, 2004 22:23:00 GMT
I actually would like to see the second part. Good use of imagery! Pilcher, I thought I talked to you about flaming people. Please be mature and responsible
I ( stefan ) deleted the posts deleted the posts. the only posts in here will be feedback
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Chris
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Post by Chris on Sept 20, 2004 6:15:59 GMT
Thanks Joe,Im thinking up a second part now.
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Post by Chris on Sept 20, 2004 17:39:26 GMT
Part 2. GuiZhang had left Japan a day later,While traveling on the boat,he had time to reflect on his desision to find Ryo.He struggled with his morals and ethics but in the end he would do it anyway. Afew days later the boat landed in the Arberdien port,the same place Ryo had landed,he steped out on to the hard concreate,"I've got to find someone who knows where he is..." He thought to himself. "GuiZhang!" A shrill high voice yelled,GuiZhang possitioned him self in the direction of the call.
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Post by JoePesciAddict on Sept 20, 2004 23:45:07 GMT
Please don't spam in these forums. By the time everyone reads this they won't know that the hell I am talking about because I am deleting the posts
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Chris
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Post by Chris on Sept 21, 2004 6:05:13 GMT
Sorry...Part 3 is on its way,I might put it on by the end if the day.
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Post by Gorek on Sept 21, 2004 9:01:14 GMT
kewl i like it so far
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Post by Master Pilcher on Sept 21, 2004 16:40:19 GMT
Do you know what chris
I have just read them and i actually thought they were Wicked
Keep It Up
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Chris
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Post by Chris on Sept 21, 2004 19:21:46 GMT
Part 3! "Joy!" GuiZhang shouted,"What..How did you know I was here?" He questioned,"Uncle Chen told me you were coming so I can to greet you" Joy said with a girlish smile. "He said you were looking for someone" She continued, "Im looking for a friend of mine" GuiZhang answered, "Really,who?" She said with an inquizitive look on here face,"His name is...Ryo Hazuki" GuiZhang saud sternley, Joy gasped in dissbelief,he hair blowing in the wind. "D..Do you know him?" he stutered,"Do you know were he is?" He continued,"H..He went to Guilin,to find the secret of the Phoenix mirror!" She replied,"Damn,so he's already left Hong Kong..." GuiZhand muttered with anger in his voice."I know he went to Bailu village!Mabye you could catch up to him" She suggested,"Mabye..." GuiZhang said,"Come with me,there's someone who wpuld like to come with you..." She said mischeveiosly....
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Post by Gorek on Sept 21, 2004 22:11:51 GMT
sounds good
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Post by Chris on Sept 22, 2004 6:34:04 GMT
Before the next part is up I want you all to guess about what hapens later in the story.
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Post by RavinRoadie on Sept 23, 2004 22:57:50 GMT
well heeeelll i dont know, but i like what i have read so far, keep it up!!
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Post by Chris on Sept 24, 2004 18:42:39 GMT
The next part will be up soon,but I've had a few things to take care off so its gonna be later than expected.
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Post by JoePesciAddict on Sept 26, 2004 23:02:23 GMT
Ok, I will guess. Is the person Chai!?
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Chris
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Post by Chris on Sept 28, 2004 11:52:36 GMT
Keep guessing... Think Shenmue II...
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Post by Gorek on Sept 28, 2004 14:44:13 GMT
xuying
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Post by Chris on Sept 29, 2004 16:29:08 GMT
Nope..
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Post by Gorek on Sept 29, 2004 23:06:08 GMT
( nope what ) yep
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Post by JoePesciAddict on Oct 15, 2004 0:43:52 GMT
Dou Niu, Yuan?
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Post by Chris on Oct 15, 2004 19:41:03 GMT
Part five is still In the works but I can say the Mystery Person is...Ren!
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