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Post by GinfnersAddict on Oct 17, 2004 3:03:11 GMT
I'm thinking of making a post of the story back in yokosuka after ryo has left for hong kong-any feedback is welcome but most of this wil be ad-libed if you will and will not be 100% accurate with the real plot I hope you enjoy.It begins just as ryo leaves his house...
1.) "I do hope ryo-san will be alright". "Don't worry Ine-san I'm sure Ryo will be home very soon". "I do hope your right fukuhara-san but I do worry, I'll just keep myself busy". "Just the two of us now....oh I almost forgot, I better go to the shops to get milk, Ryo-san gave the last of the milk to that blasted cat, will you be alright?" "Yes but please be home by 11:30 pm because I do worry". "I'm only going to the shops Ine-san I'll be gone for about 30 minutes". "O.k then bye...*sigh* I better go clean the kikchen". Suddenly she hears a noise from behind her. "He-hehehe-hegh"........
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Post by JoePesciAddict on Oct 17, 2004 6:51:49 GMT
Lol, I like it! Please do continue
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Post by ShenmueAddict on Oct 28, 2004 0:26:28 GMT
I like how you ended that first section, it leaves it on a cliffhanger, Please continue!
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Post by GinfnersAddict on Oct 28, 2004 0:43:38 GMT
ok here we go...
2.)"ahh who's there?, Yamagashi-san what are you creaping up on me like that for"."I wanted to see if Ryo has left yet bcause I wanted to drink sake with him one last time before he....."."heghhegh Lan-di sama will be pleased"."Leave her alone, fight me...".
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Post by GinfnersAddict on Jul 23, 2007 23:21:35 GMT
Hmm I'll revive this and change the style of writing, All the speech ""'s are annoying and make it tricky to read, especially the way I wrote it lol
Fuku-san was running up home when he heard Ine-san shouting "No, please stop fighting". As Fuku got closer he looked through the open gate and saw the fight. "An intruder! I'll go get help!" Fuku-san ran back down the street to the phonebox and called the police. They soon arrived and arrested Chai just in time. He was about to enter an grief ridden and naked Ine-san, as Yamagashi-san lay dead on the ground.
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Post by ShenmueAddict on Jul 25, 2007 11:45:06 GMT
LMFAO
only took 2 and a half years to continue lol so why is Ine-san naked again? chai was raping her???
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Post by GinfnersAddict on Jul 26, 2007 22:59:19 GMT
He was about to, but like it says they got there just in time! Can't be arsed writing more atm.
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Post by ShenmueAddict on Jul 31, 2007 22:58:09 GMT
LOL
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Post by GinfnersAddict on Jan 7, 2012 14:50:13 GMT
Fin
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